Thursday, May 22, 2008

Timeline of what led to the treaty of Paris

May 1754: George Washington led 150 soldiers of Virginia to victory in the French exploratory party
June/July 1754: The Albany Congress approved Franklin's plan about the union, but not every colonies accepted it.
July 1754: Washington surrendered the Fort Necessity
July 1755:the French and Indians beat Braddock and his English and colonial forces in the war
September 1755: Johnson and Hendrick triumph at lake George
October 1755: 6,000 Acadians were expelled from the Nova Scotia refusing to swear loyalty to Britain
May 1756: The English declare war to the French in Europe, the war was called the Seven Years' War
July 1758: General Jeffrey Amherts captures Louisbourg
July 1759: Johnson's English soldiers and Iroquois Indians captured Fort Niagara
September 1759: The English won the battle of Quebec
February 1763: The Treaty of Paris was signed and it ended the French and Indian war.

Glossary

WORDS:
Aristocratic: People that have manners, respect, values and qualities
--> When i mentioned that Nicholas Trist came from a Aristocratic family, it means that his family had rules, respect and manners toward the people. It could also be a religion (belonging or favoring the aristocratic) where everything is done with respect.
Ratified: To confirm something done or arranged by and representative
--> When a representative confirms a constitutional amendment it is being ratified
Definitive: Something thats complete like an article, text or book
--> When the treaty of Paris was done, it was called the Definitive Treaty of Paris, it ment that it was final and complete.

Wednesday, May 21, 2008

Another Letter To Mom

Dear Mom,
Wow, The treaty of Paris was finally signed!!! mom I was there when it was signed and it felt amazing. The Treaty was signed at the symbolically neutral ground at Paris' Hotel De York. John Adams, Benjamin Franklin, and John Jay were there representing the United States, some guy named David Hartley was representing King George 111. I was there the whole time and it took about 4 hours because everyone got a chance to speak, the treaty was read out loud and then we had to wait for the representatives to sign. The signing was suppose to be in the Maryland State House in Annapolis in November but since not a lot of delegates(only 7) got there, so they moved the date and decided too sign it in Paris. The treaty granted the United States westward to the Mississippi River, later the River got opened to both nations. The British accepted the treaty on April 9, 1754 and it took months for America to realise that the war was over. Well as you see it is very exciting, hope to see you soon, bye mother.
From your daughter
Andrea

Monday, May 19, 2008

Nicholas Trist


Full Name: Nicholas Trist
Date of Birth: June 2, 1800
State of Birth: Charlottesville, Virginia
Family: an aristocratic Virginia family
Wife: Thomas Jefferson's granddaughter
Who was he: Nicholas Trist was the chief clerk of the state department in Cuba, he worked for the President of Cuba James J Polk. During the U.S.-Mexican war, Nicholas decided to write the treaty of Guadalupe Hidalgo and finished it without a problem which finished his friendship with James J Polk.
Notable Facts: When Nicholas Trist became friends with General Winfield Scott, the President James J Polk got mad and fired Nicholas from his job. A lot of people got mad a decided to leave Mexico and go to the United states. It was clear that the people liked him. After that the war got bigger and Nicholas wanted to help his people and finish it once and for all, which he did.

Sunday, May 18, 2008

The States that were almost Mexico!


This Picture shows the states that were almost part of Mexico (Texas, California, Arizona, New Mexico, Utah, Nevada and part of Colorado). The war was between Mexico and the United States. 525,000 miles of land was given to the United States in return of fifteen Million dollars for damaged territory in Mexico. Texas still gave Mexico part of its land in 1850 which became New Mexico.

Treatry of Guadalupe Hidalgo


This Is a copy of the Treaty of Guadalupe Hidalgo. It ended the war between Mexico and the United States. In February 2, 1848 the treaty was signed by Mexican Officials and Nicholas Trist, President Polk's representative. The treaty set the southern border of the United States (and Texas) at the Rio Grande River. The treaty of Guadalupe was ratified on March 10, 1848.
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The Treaty of Guadalupe Hidalgo

It's Here!! The Treaty of Guadalupe Hidalgo was finally signed in Guadalupe Hidalgo (a state in Mexico) on February 2, 1848. The war was between the Mexican state and Texas. The Mexican government wanted to take over Texas as one of their states, but Texas wanted their own independence and be part of the United States. The treaty called Mexico to give up 55% of it's territory (Now Arizona, California, New Mexico, parts of Colorado, Nevada and Utah)in exchange of fifteen million dollars in damaged territory in Mexico. Texas is very excited about this news and It's now an independent country!!!

My Letter To Mom

August 20, 1783

Dear mom,
I'm writing to you from Paris. I am very excited because there might be a peace treaty coming soon to help us end this war. Yesterday I was very scared, I thought it wasn't going to happen but Benjamin Franklin told me to have high hopes for it. The war is between Great Britain and our own colonies America. Me and my friends are really happy but we have lost a lot of loved ones in this war. I'm sure you can't wait for me to go back home but you have to be patient and I will be there. John Adams and others might sign the peace treaty, were hoping the king of Britain will want to sign it too. The only problem is that this could take a while, they have to write down whats fair for both countries and then after they all sign it will all be over.
Love,
Your daughter Andrea

Wednesday, May 14, 2008

Treaty Between Great Britain and the United States


The Peace Treaty of the war of Great Britain and the US was published and signed by Benjamin Franklin, John Adams, and John Jay representing the US and David Hartley who was representing King George III. The treaty ended the war and Britain recognised the American independence.
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Help Us treaties!!!

Help us, Help us
We know you can
We have fought so hard for the freedom and for our rights
but we lose a loved one every minute
Help us, Help us
the government could help us, but how can we make them
Great Britain, U.S, Spain, Mexico an other parts
We need help for the hero's of our union

What will it take to write a treaty
the heart of the people and the presidents
we need it for our safety
agree on the peace
sign your signature
tel the people around us
STOP FIGHTING
It's our rights too, we should choose
fight or no fight

Help us, Help us
We need it NOW

I could feel the hope
I could see what you want
We need to do something fast
It has to be done before everyone is gone

Help us, Help us....



Reflection: I'm not really sure what kind of poem this is, I just wrote what was on my mind. I tried to feel what those people want, how they feel about the war ending. It war pretty hard but I'm still trying to think of more things to add to it. I think if i add a little more, the people who read it will understand what I'm trying to say. I wanted to do a narrative poem but i still have a little trouble with it. It took me 20 minutes to write this poem and i think i changed it about 5 times, but i like it a lot.